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Post by Kanaya Maryam on Aug 20, 2012 18:40:14 GMT -5
Character Name: Kanaya Maryam Appearance:
 Age: 15 Magica Element: Air Personality: Kanaya is a very sweet person who is very passionate about she does, whatever it may be. She has a tendency to put others first to a ridiculous extent in an attempt to be a good friend. Her language gets increasingly complex as she gets nervous or uncomfortable, to hide her insecurity, and relaxes when she does. She has a tendency to be flaily, especially when she’s feeling insecure, but she hides it well. She likes to project an aura of sophistication, and can fool most people. Biography: Kanaya grew up with her single mother in New Mexico. Her mother recently got a promotion that sent her across the country to New York. She is currently a sophomore and this her first year at Roosevelt. Quirk Sample: I Imagine It Was Quite The Grueling Trip
As To Making A Fool Of Yourself Ive Never Been Entirely Sure That Was A Feat You Were Even Capable Of
Excluding Of Course The Period Of Time Where I Thought You Were John
No Offense Meant To Him
As To Your Offer To Come To Fort Lauderdale For A Visit Well
I Would
Appreciate That
Paragraph Sample: Kanaya Maryam was sitting by the window of her dorm room, gazing out at the lake and sewing idly. It was a beautiful day, the sun was shining brightly, and she could see lots of people enjoying the water. She almost always kept the window blinds open and sat near the window, much to the consternation of her human dormmate who was always cold. Keeping the windows open had the added bonus of providing light to the several small plants she had growing.
“Ow!” she jerked back and looked down at her hand. She had pricked herself with a needle and green blood was seeping out of the wound. Putting the offending appendage in her mouth to stop the bleeding, she reached over to her desk to grab a bandage. Unfortunately in the process she fell off her chair. Naturally. Sighing, she decided that really the floor wasn’t a bad place to work and grabbed the skirt she had been working on. With the wounded hand.
The purple squiddle design she had been affixing got blood on it. She frowned. This piece in particular she had so wanted to turn out nicely... Although, that’s what she got for not paying nearly enough attention to what she was doing, she supposed. It really was a very pretty skirt. There were two layers, black with a deep purple underneath, and the upper layer was split down the right side. She had been attaching the squiddle to where the split reached a point when it fell. It was darker than her usual designs, but this one was special. It also had to finished soon, and now she had to make a new squiddle, not to mention the rest that needed to be finished... In retrospect she should have started sooner.
Other: I got the image from here: grimlydesigning.tumblr.com/, but I’m not sure if that’s the original source.
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Post by Peregrine Mendicant on Aug 20, 2012 19:06:09 GMT -5
Oh wow I'm sorry but I think you missed some major points about her character. Also that the personality section could be longer, and that some parts could be embellished on a little more? Everything else was wonderful, though. But I'm going to have to reject you for now, but feel free to re-apply because we really would love to have you!
If you have any questions please don't be afraid to ask on the OOC chat, we won't bite!<3
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